fu
Wolfcub
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Post by fu on May 18, 2006 22:09:58 GMT 2
anteeksi... sekamurteinen kun olen (turku / savo).. ;D ei sitä osaa oikein kirjoittaakaan oikein... aina kun yrittää miettiä, miten se kirjoitetaan niin tulee ongelmia, kun lausun sanat niin erillä tavalla kuin kirjoitan. ;D
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Post by twilightheart on May 18, 2006 22:13:23 GMT 2
I don`t understand a word of all the finnish stuff over there. Oh well, I´ll post something in english now. This is a poem that I wrote in the night when Quorthon died (couldn`t sleep anyway as I was to shocked).
Against all bad voices you stood strong, against all critics you stood tight. Those doubting you, you proved them wrong, for your beliefs you`d always fight.
Generations you enchanted with your ideas, outstanding music and lyrics so true… analysing history, nature, dreams and fears, like no one else could ever do.
Your songs… amazing, wakening, cutting like knifes, you sang them for us… forever to be proud. The music you gave… such a precious gift in our lifes! Unimaginable to ever live without!
So suddenly the news came through from out there at the end of a fucked up day. Is there no one to wake me from this nightmare? Would it help to damn all Gods? Would it help to pray?
Thinking back of words of thy, feeling like never again I could rest. In the twilight I stand and cry … we`ve lost the very best.
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Post by frostheim on May 18, 2006 22:18:38 GMT 2
anteeksi... sekamurteinen kun olen (turku / savo).. ;D ei sitä osaa oikein kirjoittaakaan oikein... aina kun yrittää miettiä, miten se kirjoitetaan niin tulee ongelmia, kun lausun sanat niin erillä tavalla kuin kirjoitan. ;D Itsellä suku isän puolelta Pöytyältä (ja omassa puheessa vahva elementti nimenomaan lounaismurteista) ja äidinpuolelta itäisemmästä Suomesta, jotta ei sen tarvitse murretaustoista välttämättä olla edes kiinni; aihetta kun on mahdollista maassamme opiskella ja tutkia pidemmältikin, jos ei omat taustatekijät sekä -vaikuttimet muutoin tunnu "riittävän", heh. For non-Finnish speakers: Just a bit of quick and harmless chit chat about dialects and dialectal backgrounds, as well as how to write a couple of words brought up by me there a while earlier, thus nothing very special, carry on, people.
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fu
Wolfcub
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Post by fu on May 18, 2006 22:46:27 GMT 2
onhan murteet opeteltavissakin toki... itse menin kurssille ja nyt luokkatoverini puhuvat jonkin sorttista savoa aina väliin vahingossa. parhaitenhan sen oppii kuuntelemalla, eikä kirjoista lukemalla.. Itselleni ei ainakaan tartu kirjoista mitään kamalasti päähän, kun taas kuuntelemalla se tarttuu kuin häkä... ;D tässä on ollut kamala yritys pitää oma rakas murteeni ettei turku tule vallitsevaksi mokomukseksi. ;D ehkäpä pitää taas vaihtaa kirjoitus omaksi surkeaksi englannikseni, ettei huomenna näy tuhatta viestiä ihmettelemässä tätä? maybe i write here some lyrics more when i find them all... and maybe translate them someday in english too. ;D Sorry to bother you guys!
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flame
Eagle
flame is dancing in the night,the shadows are really alive,the clan of the forest is singing with me
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Post by flame on May 19, 2006 14:56:09 GMT 2
This is one I wrote with my old German Punkrockband which shows my twisted mind
Ich bin schwarz und ich bin weiß - ich bin böse und ich bin gut ich bin 2 Seiten der Medaille bin beherscht und ich bin Wut Versuch mich nicht zu verstehen - mach mir selber keinen Reim eben grad noch nett & freundlich - jetzt schon wieder hundsgemein
In mir schlummern 2 Gestalten - Dr. Jeckyll & Mr. Hyde grad noch ängstlich wie ein Reh - jetzt zu jedem Schritt bereit
Ich bin sanft & ich bin wild - ich bin dunkel und ich bin hell vor nem liedschlag noch ein Dorfdepp und jetzt schon intellektuell Ich bin Ruhe & ich bin Sturm ich bin hart und ich bin weich war ich grad noch bettelarm bin ich jetzt schon stinkend reich
In mir schlummern 2 Gestalten - Dr. Jeckyll & Mr. Hyde Eben grad noch völlig nüchtern - jetzt schon wieder stinkend breit
Ich bin gerne nicht normal - wer will denn schon sein wie ihr eben sanft noch wie ein Lamm werd ich wieder mal zum Tier In mir schlummern 2 Gestalten - Dr. Jeckyll & Mr. Hyde Vor Sekunden noch tieftraurig - jetzt schon voller Heiterkeit
Translation will follow
Greets Flame
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Post by frostheim on May 19, 2006 17:15:33 GMT 2
onhan murteet opeteltavissakin toki... En nyt varsinaisesti tuota edes tarkoittanut, vaan nimenomaan sitä, että aihetta murteista kokonaisuudessaan on mahdollista sekä joskus ynnä toisinaan jopa hyväkin myös erikseen opiskella toisistaan poikkeavien sekä erottuvien piirteiden, ominaisuuksien sekä olennaisuuksien hahmottamiseksi, jos siis sellaiset seikkaintilat suinkin vain sattuvat kiinnostamaan. En siis niinkään meinannut itse murteiden nimenomaista opettelua tjsp., sillä kuten itsestäänselvyyden aiheen tiimoilta tuossa itsekin juuri toteat: parhaitenhan sen oppii kuuntelemalla, eikä kirjoista lukemalla.. Luonnollisestikin juuri näin; ei lisättävää. ;D tässä on ollut kamala yritys pitää oma rakas murteeni ettei turku tule vallitsevaksi mokomukseksi. ;D Itse taasen puolustan omaa lounaismurrepohjaani henkeen ja vereen. Enough with this Finnish offtopic chit chat.
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Post by magnas on May 20, 2006 19:03:52 GMT 2
I wrote this one for my friend's band
I've lived a long life my days almost gone Now I must die so alone I saw all my sons Leaving sunny France For vision of fortune they're run
House lies in ruins my garden is dead My son is marching to east From order of king For one golden ring We're drinking from chalice of tears
chorus Hammer in hand rose on the shield Let no foe to leave battlefield King on the horse leads you to charge For the cross you've started the march You left your wives you left your children Is that price for (you) left your wisdom? For the glory honor and fame For the gold you are all dead man
No tombstone no cross in desert dust Saracens won't show mercy Far from the home By order of Rome Diamonds to lords to you only rust
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Post by twilightheart on May 21, 2006 20:39:18 GMT 2
Here`s something I wrote as a child:
Have you looked outside the window recent, to see the sky waving in saphir-blue light? Have you felt you want to cherish this moment, and leave your boring place.. get out of sight?
Just to run to the forest to lay down and rest between ancient trees and a breath-taking flower-scene, breathing pure, clear air at its best, at a place so beautiful you´ve never before seen.
Just enjoying nature´s innocence all around with all its romantic beauty so full of miracles, bringing you all the peace of mind ever able to be found, your brain full of dreams and colorful sparkles.
The sound of a small river near you brings grace, washes away all poison and pain. To know you`re a free man brings a smile to your face, and you know without it you would go insane.
So, have you looked outside the window today? Have you felt what I was just writing about then? Does it pull your soul out to nature for a stay? Well, then rush to the forest as soon as you can!
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flame
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flame is dancing in the night,the shadows are really alive,the clan of the forest is singing with me
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Post by flame on May 22, 2006 7:43:47 GMT 2
Here is one i finished during my night-watch. I have to check the grammar later, when my brain works clear again....
Some sort of a shaman story song
Sometimes they said son to me - I rather had a family walked down through pain and sorrowness - but then went out into wilderness
4 Days without water and food then suddenly I felt the mood to spread my wings and stretch my fur run down the hills and fly up to the sky
Deep in the forest I saw a light it felt for me like an acient might long forgotten it said to me with a powerful voice JOIN US its your final choice
It said t me the world of ghosts awaits you there are 2 Worlds you can live in both Use the mushrooms use the spirit of me and join our spiritual Family
I trusted him and ate his flesh then I took deep down my final breath then other voices through the mist came across a howling with them !
The Ghost of plants the earth itself they hugged me took me under her shelf deep down in a world with other rules and nothing would be like it was
I heard a Ripping felt I DIED but that was not the end of night the took my bones they feast on me one and a half eternity
They re-relived me powerful since that time i can feel the truth - no longer man more than a ghost a spirit with my body !
Now i´m a spiritual warrior a shaman with my dreams of a land and when I dance with the drum in my hand I think at first to the mushroom ghost
What do you mean ?
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Post by diesel on May 24, 2006 18:38:08 GMT 2
Mother nature, life and death For those about to die Bloody fields, black revenge Tearin us apart! Killers hands, blaze of flames Armagedon is coming to us Evil rising in our eyees Feelings will remain!
My vision of a new day dawn Running for the night My vision of a new day dawn Today I'm born, tomorow I'll die!
Nightmare comes in dream again I'm afraid to fall asleep Puppet in a mirror I can see Playing a game with me! Life has gone, death has come It's time for judgement day By night feel fear, by day I sleep 'Till I rest in peace!
My soul is crying, body is dieing I'm a man on the edge Sun is rising, and I'm looking A vision of a new day dawn!!!
What you think???
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flame
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flame is dancing in the night,the shadows are really alive,the clan of the forest is singing with me
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Post by flame on May 25, 2006 13:34:10 GMT 2
Cool lines, diesel. Anything else in common ?
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MoonDancer
Clansman
"Voices are calling from somewhere below"
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Post by MoonDancer on May 25, 2006 13:57:19 GMT 2
flame, diesel: congrats. I like your lyrics, anything else to share?
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Post by jarmo on May 25, 2006 15:22:48 GMT 2
I like it, but may I ask in what conditions you wrote this? Did something happen to make you write this? Or did you just write it for fun?
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flame
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flame is dancing in the night,the shadows are really alive,the clan of the forest is singing with me
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Post by flame on May 25, 2006 16:31:51 GMT 2
I like it, but may I ask in what conditions you wrote this? Did something happen to make you write this? Or did you just write it for fun? No , it started when I read about an austrian woman. I took some of this red-white mushrooms and had visions about it. The rest is history and lyrical imagination C U Flame
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Post by diesel on May 29, 2006 14:49:59 GMT 2
The War In The Middle Earth
After three hundred years of pain, suffer and misery, The war has began in the middle earth!
In the bright morning Sailing into the sun Afterwards we looked Those who will die
And old man full of thoughts Old man full of memories Trying to make a change If he could have a piece of chance
/We're damned for all time There's no time to runaway 'Cause we're damned for all time Now turn back
Brothers and friends Looking at enemies Ther's no time To say our prayers
That day I cried Thinking about my life And emptiness I knew That's overtaking my soul / Ran into death Stand on bloody fields Long distance view That takes my breathe away
Serpants we were For so long time But now we're marching To a better life / Bloody field still stands here Painted all in red All across the sea Bring us pain and misery
Laying on the ground Covered all in blood Just a piece of chance To make it all changed
...and we were there, fighting for freedom. So now we can be hallowed by the name. We're not prisoners anymore, we are now on our own...
OK! I wrote this for my band! I wrote this songs when I was depressed or very angry! Maybe you'll find some mistakes 'cause my English is bad! btw I'm from Croatia!
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